Winners Writing Course - Lesson 4
15 comments
#writingclass
Dear Reader,
In Lesson 4 of #wewrite, we paid attention to stories (crime and fable), commenting, and a short film review. Like in the lessons before we were present in different communities. Unfortunately, only 6 participants wrote a review about a short film (video) and 2 out of 6 did all three tasks. Twelve participants are good for amazing stories and reviews worth your time reading and I would say follow them.
Results of the tasks
Task 1 - Crime Story
- The 550 wordcount plus prompt by @freewritehouse was not always followed/used
- Points were given for commenting and engagement
- Problems noticed: not reading the task, following the rules, use of hashtags, upvoting
Task 2 - Fable
- Good fables, some remarkable and two not really fables but still good reads
- Points were given for commenting and engaging as well
- Problems are the same as mentioned above (see Task 1)
Task 3 - Short Film Review
- The word "short" is missed by 2/3 of the participants
- The average review was good
- Like and dislike was mentioned (storyline, producers, and so on)
- Points are given for commenting +engagement
- Problems are the same as mentioned above (see Task 1)
The Winners
The winners were calculated by adding up the points obtained in tasks 1, 2 and 3 plus points for commenting and engagement.
#1 @joslud - 33.5 points
The crime story is remarkable and a review is written about a short film.
Have you seen God yet? His portrait has already appeared | [es-en]
#2 @liasteem - 32 points
A good crime story. Her "fable" can make a good story for children. An Indonesian short film is shared. She made a great effort in commenting and engaging.
Short Film Review - Adit, Sopo & Jarwo
#3 @saintkelvin17 - 32 points
The film reviewed wasn't a short film but he was the only one who started with the name of the sports movie, director and so on. Extra points he received by leaving good comments and engagement.
Hustle - Basketball Movie Review
#3 @marito74 - 32 points
Let us be the detective, wrote a fable with a moral (or not), commented, replied and reviewed Forest Gump which isn't a short film.
#5 @solperez - 28.5 points
Her fable is remarkable and touching. She did not write a review about a short film and what she wrote was way more than just a review...
On the other side of the sky: Does faith involve sacrifices?
Lessons + Winners
The reports used you find back in the lessons.
Comments